What About Lizzy?

I’ve been thinking about what to do with Lizzy. πŸ˜‰ After all she’s the “real” culprit in the stats final cheating fiasco! Stella has already dealt with Cat adequately and Dr. Kato will take care of the rest; however, Lizzy is still not seen to. *eg* We all know Lucy is a formidable top, even more strict than Stalla, so Liz is not gonna get away right? Plus, she might face more serious troubles at the college too.

The problem is my creative juices seem to have dried up! Definitely not flowing freely atm. 😦 So I’m having a “What to Do with Lizzy” contest to see what you great readers might come up with. Heehee. Please leave your suggestions in the comment section, plot, character, position, punishment, scenario, implements, anything, ‘k?

Muchas gracias!

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92 Responses to What About Lizzy?

  1. Ash says:

    Esto suena muy interesante! I’m going to have to think about it… poor Lizzy!

    • Peach says:

      Gracias. Hablas espanol?
      Poor Lizzy indeed. Doesn’t know (yet) what’s coming to her! *g*

      • Ash says:

        I don’t think she should get any brutal punishment, but perhaps she should get extra punishments other than spanking? I always appreciate an otk spanking… 😳 I think that she should get spanked with Lu’s hand and a hair brush… cuz… that’s what I like to read. Oh and there must be scolding!

        I am really looking forward to see what you come up with though. ❀

  2. Lucy giving a spanking With a belt/tawse to Lizzy in front of the other cheating girls, with her bending over forward, facing the girls during it and with the other girls running a commentary on the spanking.

    I think they should either get expelled for cheating or have to do something to earn the same kind of deal as Cat did. Like offering to work at the school. I could see Dr. Kato offering the deal to lizzy if Lucy gives her a reminder spanking each week of the β€œextra” session.

  3. Lot says:

    I was worried about Lizzy after the last part. Maybe she has to take an F? Seems like getting expelled is too hard a punishment. Maybe Prof K could paddle her? Then get punished by her girlfriend in private.

  4. cutey1991 says:

    I like the bent over facing the other girls spanking. And I think they should have to be on probation with Dr. Kato as a advisor with spankings for any misdeeds

  5. Mimi says:

    Lucy could punish Lizzy after calling Cat and Stella over to her place. She could (probably) cut Lizzy’s skin with a cane for the first time in rage. Maybe Stella could intervene to calm down Lucy. In college, she could get an F or kept on probation.

    • Peach says:

      Thank you Mimi and welcome! Hmm, cut the skin in rage? Is that a bit too harsh?
      I like your idea of getting the four of them together though. *g*

  6. Well… the first thing I consider with my characters is the pleasure versus punishment question. Where on that barometer does this scene… *ahem* …sit? πŸ™‚ If it is the latter, then ensuring that Lizzy fully understands her transgression is important, as is punishing her in a way which is stricter than she would enjoy. Sometimes that means less attention, not more…. But then I am an evil Top. *g* Other times, it means foregoing the spanking she likes (OTK, for example) and delivering one which reminds her she has gone too far…. Of course, if this is on the pleasure end of a spanking, give her exactly what she likes, but keep her guessing as to just how much, how long and satisfying it is going to be! πŸ™‚

    • Peach says:

      TMT! What a pleasant surprise to have you visit and comment! Evil Top? LOL
      Hmm, less attention… that’s very interesting, like psychological punishment huh? I have to try that next time in a story. *g*

      I don’t know if you’ve read any of my stories, but would LOVE to hear your opinions if you had! I’m a huge fan of your stories and hope there’s a new one soooooon. πŸ˜‰

      Thank you for visiting and commenting!

  7. Hupotasso says:

    I’m always a sucker for cross-over characters such as the time detectives from the Law and Order television series appeared on the Homicide TV series. Please hold that thought.

    Given the seriousness of her conduct, I don’t see how Lizzie avoids expulsion, or at least a suspension, with leave to reapply to the University. Lucy will be livid, but she’ll also want to find a way to help Lizzie. To that end, I think Lucy should consult her former beloved professor…. *drumroll*… Dr. Genevieve Osaki. In addition to advising Lucy on how to physically punish a recalcitrant student such as Lizzy, isn’t Sensei an expert on education technology? She might be able to assist in arranging for Lizzy to take on-line courses for a semester or year until the school lets her return to campus.

  8. Melissa says:

    Hi, Peach! I’ve loved your stories for a long time! This is fascinating,and I couldn’t resist! I actually agree with Hupotasso (I love cross overs, too) and Mimi because as I think Lucy is more formidable than Stella, You had Lucy asking Stella for a cane once, and Stella said she didn’t have one But Dr. O has one πŸ™‚ But think maybe Lucy is enraged at Lizzy for blowing her scholarship, Liz calls Cat crying before it’s about to take place. Cat asks Stella to go over and talk to her, and she does and suggests Lucy talking to her old professor Dr. O for advice on how to punish a recalcitrant (great word, Hupotasso πŸ™‚ ) and do online classes. I think you should write off the other students involved as spoiled and uninterested in an education because that gets into legal issues in a public school and seems too unbelievable.

    • Peach says:

      Hi Melissa, thank you for stopping by and commenting! So glad you like my stories. πŸ™‚
      Wait, Dr. O has a cane? I don’t remember that part. LOL. Have to go back and check!
      The cross over idea is great, and I like what you said at the end. πŸ™‚ It’s very true.

  9. Summer says:

    Idk all these are great I’m slightly going threw withdrawal nothing to read…..

    • Peach says:

      Aw you bored Summer? *g*
      I just finished “Standing Firm” by Stardawn Cabot and enjoyed it. It’s a fun ff read. Also I bought “Penitent” by Robin Smith and heard it’s good. Have you read any of those?
      Thanks for stopping by!

  10. Rebecca says:

    Since it was stats Lizzy cheated in, have Lucy or Cat (since she’ll be the TA for stats) prepare a stats assignment for her weekly. Her mark that she receives on it, determines how many strokes she receives. For example, if she receives a mark of 100%, she’s managed to avoid a spanking. A mark of 85%, is 15 strokes. The lower the mark, could help determine the implement used. Just my two cents:) LOVE your stories!

    • Peach says:

      Hi Rebecca, welcome! That’s a great idea ’cause she still needs to pass the course and receive good grades to eventually get her scholarship back. πŸ™‚ Spankings can help motivate her to study hard and deter slacking!
      Thank you for sharing your ideas. Sounds like ya know what you’re talking about. πŸ˜‰

  11. Summer says:

    No I don’t want to spend money lol barely making anything right now

  12. Summer says:

    Plus going through crap with boyfriend and reading is a great stress reliever and there is nothing

  13. dilli62 says:

    When i asked my Dom for Her suggestions for your dilemna, She suggested that Lucy instruct Cat (with Stella’s permission, of course) to administer Lizzy’s punishment while Stella and Lucy watch. Lizzy is constantly coming up with ideas that end up getting both her and Cat into trouble, so it stands to reason that the Cat should be the one carrying out the punishment. With both of their bare bottoms exposed, Cat can spank Lizzy (your instruments/positions of choice) and if she isn’t doing it properly or hard enough, then either of the Doms can spank Cat. (The thought of that just blew me away, but wanted to share it with you as a possible solution!)

    • Peach says:

      Thank you dilli and please thank your Dom for me! Wow, I’ve never thought about having Cat spanking. πŸ˜‰ Looks like the two misbehaving girls’ ordeal ain’t over yet, not by a long shot! *eg*

  14. Alyx says:

    Perhaps unsurprisingly, I’m going to echo TMT. πŸ™‚ I think you need to decide what kind of scene you’re going to set up. I think thus far most of your spanking scenes blend discipline with tenderness and (frequently) eroticism. And if that’s the kind of thing you want to write for Lizzy, then I think perhaps a severe scolding that makes Lizzy really see the seriousness of what she did, and regret her actions. Then maybe something like banning her from the internet (or some loved hobby), in addition to the spanking. Followed by lovemaking, of course. *g*

    If on the other hand you want it to be a punishment only, you could introduce something new like a punishment mat (something uncomfortable to sit on after the spanking) while she has to study and/or re-take the exam. And of course you can still have tenderness, but no erotic aftermath associated with the punishment. Depends on how seriously you want to treat the infraction, I guess.

    I think Hupo’s suggestion of a cross-over is a great idea, btw. Whether you do it with this story or a different one, it seems like a natural fit, since they have college in common. πŸ™‚

    • Peach says:

      Hi Alyx, thank you for your topply ideas. πŸ™‚ I like a *severe scolding* – I mean in the story. πŸ˜‰ Haha a coarse mat? Ouchie! Man, all these *ahem* great ideas (poor Liz). A lot to think about! Thank you so much. *hug*

  15. Mimi says:

    I like many of the ideas, including the ‘cross-over’ and that of Cat made to punish Lizzy. However, I can’t wait to read what you come up with, Peach… Whatever thread of idea you create! Just love your writing style 😊 πŸ’

  16. here is an idea Lizzy being put in diapers and being treated like a baby for acting like a baby.

    • Peach says:

      Diapers? Interesting idea, but cheating on an exam is not baby-like behavior. Immature and irresponsible yes, but not exactly “acting like a baby.” You agree?
      Thanks for stopping by and commenting!

      • your welcome and I think it would be cute to see cat or Lizzy being treated like a baby well cat may even like it because Stella likes babying cat a lot and is cat one day going to give Stella a spanking.

        • Peach says:

          There’s an idea! I gather you’re into age play eh? πŸ˜‰
          No, Cat is never gonna spank Stella … well, not for discipline.

  17. Summer says:

    Are you gonna write something soon

  18. Kasey says:

    I love your stories, Peach. I agree with a lot of the comments. I like what PiercingGold and Rebecca have to say. Lizzy got Cat in trouble, and Cat’s punishment involves a semi-public spanking and more serious private spanking by Stella, as well as an entire semester assisting Dr Kato. I think it’s appropriate to consider all aspects of Cat’s punishment, when Lucy disciplines Lizzy. Perhaps Lizzy gets spanked in front of Stella, Cat, and Dr. Kato (maybe the other two who cheated, as well), regularly throughout the semester. I like Rebecca’s idea of the number of swats being dependent upon a weekly test, but I think there should be a minimum number of spanks as a consequence, even if she gets 100%. Lucy could also spank Lizzy prior to every statistics class, so she doesn’t fall asleep.

    I think Lizzy needs to take an F for the course, and retake it. I don’t want to see her expelled. Perhaps Dr. Kato can help persuade the board to keep her on as a student if she knows Lizzy’s punishment before she goes before the board. Maybe Lizzy’s punishment needs to involve a non-spanking consequence for Lizzy, that the board can see (community service on campus?).

  19. Peach says:

    Hi Kasey, welcome! Sorry for the late reply (I was traveling).
    Thank you for your excellent suggestions. Yeah I don’t want to see Lizzy expelled either. I’m going to mull over all the scenarios and see where (or whether) the inspiration strikes. πŸ˜‰
    Thanks again for taking the time to comment. Much appreciated. πŸ™‚

  20. Elizabeth says:

    Hi there. I’m an incorrigible lurker (anyone spank for that? ;)), but I really enjoy your stories. I think you’re right, that you’ve got some great ideas from people about how to handle Lizzy.

    The only thing I thought of adding is, perhaps, some exploration of the dynamics of Lucy and Lizzy’s relationship, as well as the reasons for Lizzy’s decision to cheat. I have to admit that I feel sorry for Lizzy when I read the stories, because she gets punished harder and less tenderly, as the “big sister”/bad influence. (Not that this is a bad thing, of course :)).

    I think it might be interesting to set up a scene where she’s spanked and “severely scolded” (love those, too!) for a little while and then starts to cry in a way that, maybe, Lucy hasn’t heard her cry before. Lucy could stop the spanking, insist that Lizzy talk to her, and Lizzy could talk about being jealous of how Cat’s treated and, maybe, Lucy could decide that Lizzy needs more attention and, umm, loving, appropriately delivered correction than she’s been getting. Lucy could say she’s got an idea about how to help Lizzy feel better, as well as resolve the school issue. In the meantime, Lucy would need to finish spanking Lizzy for cheating and getting Cat in trouble, instead of just talking to Lucy about what’s wrong. The spanking could be a tender, but hard, one, perhaps. Maybe Lucy could use her hand and have Lizzy say she’s sorry for being a bad girl with each spank, or maybe there’s an implement that reminds Lizzy of her childhood (and what Lizzy didn’t get…or got too much of) that Lucy could spank with, reminding Lizzy along the way that Lucy will spank the right way every time Lizzy misbehaves.

    Then, Lucy could bring Dr. O in to help (like, as an academic and DD consultant…now, there’s a niche field). Dr. O could talk Lizzy one-on-one, which could be a fun opportunity to have Lizzy describe the discipline she’s been receiving to a stern top, speak with her colleagues and arrange for Lizzy to retake the course, and then help Lucy create a plan for Lizzy. Maybe Lizzy gets grounded, and maybe she meets with Dr. O and Lucy weekly for help/discipline that addresses her needs.She could write down her misdeeds (including acting out rather than saying what she’s feeling) and read them aloud over each of their knees as she’s soundly spanked and lectured about how much she’s cared for and how she’ll receive more disciplinary attention than she bargained for when she doubts it. Or, something along those lines.

    Gee, guess I had more thoughts than I realized! Hope that helps and doesn’t muddy the waters for you…

    • Peach says:

      Hi Elizabeth, welcome! Thank you for delurking. Glad you enjoy the stories here. πŸ™‚
      Wow, you have some great ideas. I must admit I have not really explored Lizzy and Lucy’s relationship that much. They are kind of in the background. And I agree that Lucy seems stricter and more “harsh” in some of the scenes. Your suggestions provide a new dimension to viewing these couples and their TTWD relationships.
      Man, I hope I can come up with something interesting for Lizzy’s story. πŸ˜‰

  21. Summer says:

    So….

  22. Mimi says:

    How long are you going to make the brats wait for this one, ma’am? πŸ˜‰

  23. Ash says:

    Peach… did you ever make up your mind? πŸ˜€ Will we see what happens to Lizzy? ❀

    • Peach says:

      Ash! I’m in the middle of my very first motorcycle trip, sitting comfortably in the Tardis (you of all people should know that! LOL)
      Seriously, I’ve got some ideas percolating in my head, but it’s gonna take a while I’m afraid. Thanks for asking.

  24. Summer says:

    Officially grouchy.

  25. Summer says:

    Oh and presumably inpatient.

    • Peach says:

      Grouchy and impatient? LOL Nothing spanky to read?

      I’m currently in Europe so it’s going to be a while before a new story materializes. But I just linked a new story blog in the blogroll. Please go check it out, there’s a nice ff story there! πŸ™‚

  26. Summer says:

    Thanks

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  28. Mimi says:

    Knock knock… Still waiting ma’am! But beginning to shift from foot to foot :P. Can i be rewarded by the end of this month?

  29. Hupotasso says:

    I just figured it out. You, Alyx and TMT are competing to see who can go longest without posting a spanking brand new ff erotic spanky story. Forget it. You’re never going to “beat” either of them. :). Please concede that you can’t “win” and give in to your writing muse.
    You know, the way I figure, it’s been about six months your fans have been waiting. That’s a full semester, and by now, Lizzy’s suspension would be over. Why not think about a different story using these characters– a Christmas story perhaps– and maybe, at some future time, do a flashback story about the consequences of Lizzy’s cheating?

    In any case, whatever you decide, I can’t wait to read new fiction by you.

    • Peach says:

      Hola Counselor!
      I know I know. πŸ˜‰ Actually I’ve done about half of Lizzy’s story but then shifted to working on another Maddy and Gen story cause I suddenly started missing them so much!!!

      Thank you for stopping by Hupo. Let’s all go bug Alyx and TMT, shall we? πŸ˜‰

      • Ash says:

        Maddy and Gen?! When? ❀
        And can we get a hint about what Maddy gets up to next? And will you tell us if you took any of our comments into consideration when choosing Lizzy's punishment? XD
        Poor Lizzy… did she lose her scholarship… 😦

  30. Summer says:

    When is your next story going to be posted

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